Why?

Why?

A Poem by Solitary Dreamer

Why can't we all just get along?

Why does everything have to be taken wrong?

Why can't we all just love one another,

And be happy for each other?

Why do we scream and yell,

About the lies each of us tell?

Maybye one day, one of us will be dead.

And everyone will be wishing they had said...

Why?

For once in your life,

Ask why.

And maybye you will make someone

Think about their fight.

© 2010 Solitary Dreamer


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just a small typo - 'scream' instead of 'ssream' ... i have thought on similar lines a no. of times .. why things can't be the way that everyone is happy . why so much pain and misery . why .. but sadly there is no answer .. can perfectly relate to this write . its amazing that at such a tender age you are capable of exercising an insight into the deeper intricacies of life

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the challenge in your words to be kind to each other. You used few words to create a strong message. Very well done, I like the way you write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful. A rather true but unanswerable question you ask here. A good poem with so much emotion! I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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