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How to put this

How to say

How I feel

Every day

Bit of love

Bit of hate

bit of smiles

bit of fate

What is life,

but a memory,

A fantasy?

Emotions controlling

our every motion

till we are just nothing

but tition

repittion

the world has a flow

we try to control

but nobody knows

how much I loathe

those who control

who try to control

to control me

the free

the world

I see

the truth of it all

behind the glass window

just tell me

what you see

in the world

and it's beauty

just think to yourself

what is beyond

this life

this window

the stain on our hearts

greed, curruption,

Insanity, vanity,

lies, assumptions,

can't you see, what is free?

None, the answer be

we hold ourselves

tethered to

the "popular"

the "Now"

and all I can say

Is there is no way

I'll just fall in line

but I will write this line

so others may find

the truth in this rhyme.

Author's Note

I did not plan any of this out I just started it here and continued until I finished so it may not stay on track completely.

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

It's wonderful, and there doesn't have to be a track to follow for the reader, as long as the writer feels that it flows. It's what You are trying to communicate with us, not necessarily what we've decided we want to hear. That's the wonderful thing about poetry, its about you and what you want and what you think and no one else has any say in it:) Anyway, this is really awesome:)

[dawn aulis]

Many of my poems come to me the same way, this is well written and so true, something that needs to be said.

[Rekain]

Thanks. I always enjoy it when someone compliments my work. It kind of...went between rhyme and reason and (I had listened to eminem recently) has a slight rhythm to it at one point. And I completely went off topic with thanking you lol.