Broken heart

I loved you with my whole being.
But that trust
Was
Shattered
When you
Betrayed
My heart .

Deep down
My
Head says No
AND MY HEART
SAYS
Yes

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your belief and hope, your words and presence in the cafe show such a personal strength of character. Your husband and children + of all ages, are so lucky to have you. May your dreams always been coloured by that Eternal Rainbow.

[Coyote Poetry]

The heart give-up last. Always a little of us want the love to be renewed. You said everything needed in the poetry. Thank you dear Rosalind for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[AJNJ]

The heart never sees reason, does not remember the past and refusesd to take lessons from it. And we still go on heeding it...Loved the simplicty and power of your message!

[Chris Shaw]

And what a dilemma you find yourself in. We continually allow our heart to rule where love is concerned and that is why we suffer. A lovely little piece of brevity.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is indeed the trouble with people with open hearts. They are vulnerable to being taken advantage of and may even forgive abusive partners because of their need to love and be loved in a state of low self-esteem. Written in a short, punchy style.

[Pete]

nothing worse than love betrayed. i know the feeling all too well. well said and something many can relate to ... :)

[Onlyme]

So many can relate to this one Rosalind. When your heart rules your head. And you love someone you should not.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Trust is a relationship MUST and when broken, it not only destroys a current relationship but may even hinder any future opportunities! Great brave share my friend and a commendable poetic write - bravo... :-)

[Richard McLin]

Heartbreaking, yet the heart and the brain don't always agree. Very nice piece.
-Richard