Kisses

Which kiss will you be?

I've had the lips of others cover mine
In wet soggy moments awkwardly applied
At moments that seemed inappropriate and uncomfortable

I've felt the softness
Of desire that electrofied my light and mouthed my shadows
Caressed my body in waves applied with passion

I've felt the kisses if dismissal
The ones given to end a sentence only half spoken
A sentiment only partially meant

I've felt the face of another pressed against mine
A happy reunion of a precious one
Too long parted and then returned

I've been kissed by the eyelashes of little ones
Who know not how to manipulate or request
Only love so pure and true

I've tasted the tongues
That whispered lies to my ears
And told me fables of delight

And even kissed the faces
Of secret enemies that waited in dark shadows
To take me by surprise

But as for the kisses that truly i desire
Can come only from the one who truly knows my substance
And in that moment will press against my lips and absorb my soul

Author's Note

Special thanks to KCthelastboyscout for inspiring this piece. A study of kisses... thanks for stopping in and leaving a comment!

Reviews

[Gee]

Yep, they can be awkward, embarrassing, uncomfortable, unwanted..
But as you say when with the one you love, beautiful.
Used to love snogging the faces off the pretty birds at the local " hops" back in the day, God only knows what they used to say about me to their friends
Good morning

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Haha too funny! I'm sure there are stories about me as well, but what is life without giving someone something to write about 😉

[Gee]

Ahhh, but you didn't wear too tight trousers that showed just exactly how much you enjoyed the experience !!
Once even prematurely " arrived" whilst slow dancing with a right old tease, lights came on, she walked off leaving me with an ever increasing wet patch spreading across the front of my jeans....most embarrassing moment of my life, well, that and me trying to stop the maids from coming into my holiday apartment when I was mid shag with my now wife. The maids got to the door just before I did, them leaving, screaming down the hallway at the sight of my exposed, West pointing manhood.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Haha sounds like you've got something to write a poem about there 😏

[J. B.]

absolutely loved this piece. one of your best pieces, I think :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank u very much for the review! Come back anytime!

[J. B.]

absolutely! please check out some of my stuff as well :)

[Einstein Noodle]

especially like this line:
"Of desire that electrofied my light and mouthed my shadows " ...loved reading "...elec tro fied ..." it gave me a distinct persona ... now saying it a few more times i am reminded of the "Grease" song
https://youtu.be/7oKPYe53h78
almost a life in review from the point of kisses ..pretty creative says i! in this line: "I've felt the kisses if dismissal" do you mean Of dismissal? i think there is a lot more potential in this poem for color passion and sensuality .. but that's just me ...kisses are kisses after all ... i am also drawn to V7 .. an aspect i would never have considered .. but now am pondering over it ..its a pretty revealing verse i think .. on humanity actually ..glad i stopped to visit
E.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much for reviewing! I loved watching your process and the song is a nice touch! Really appreciate it so much!

[Chris]

You've covered a wide range of life and existence...

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you for stopping in and reading my piece!

[Chris]

You're welcome

[Babe Roxx]

Beautifully stated...kisses do feel good. :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you! And yes, they do!

[Babe Roxx]

You are very welcome. :)

[emmajoy]

' I've been kissed by the eyelashes of little ones
Who know not how to manipulate or request
Only love so pure and true '

Kisses are supposed to be the shaking of a stranger's hand in search for a welcoming heart! If that's the case, you've captured so many kinds of kisses so beautifully, so accurately!

This really is a cleverly worded post, silky smooth, vocabulary fine, metered musical piece of writing.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Enjoy! Thank you so much for stopping by! So enjoy your comments and reviews always! And I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[Tabby Mac]

Wow!! Love the ending! Well done...very creative write!!
Tabby

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much Tabby, always such a pleasure to have you read my work!

[Poeticsecrets16]

I really like this poem. I like the imagery implemented on this one. "wet soggy" Oooooo, very detailed. It's very well-structured; 8 stanzas and 3 lines each. The tone shift in stanza 7 line 2 is astonishing. Well done!

[EcstaticEuphoria]

thank you so much! I really appreciate your through review and comments!

[Poeticsecrets16]

Of course!