A dark summer's day

A dark summer's day

A Poem by Ryzo

A darkened summer's day is once again here to visit

I look on through the grey clouds as i hear the birds chirp

My day of relaxing on a summer's day has hit an almighty divot

 

I flick through pages for inspiration, its no use, i fight the feeling of exasperaton

Annoyed with a shadow of anger creeping up and over me, i look on into the frustration

 

When she calls i pick up the phone and hear her soft, angelic voice gently kissing into my ears

My stomach twists and turns as the butterflies violently bounce around inside me

My thoughts run rampid and i see what i must write, i realise its not all hearbreak and tears

 

Tomorrow, the sun will peek through the clouds and shine bright to the awoken world

Goodmoring! The sun will cry out as the people of the earth will crawl out of their beds, and into a promising future.

 


© 2011 Ryzo



Author's Note

Ryzo
If any problems with grammor please ignore... This was one i wrote at random and out of the blue.

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This is beautiful.
That's all I gotta say, nothing wrong with it except GRAMMAR. XD

Posted 5 Years Ago


It speaks to the child in all of us, almost to the tickle, well done, good read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Go Garfield and Pookie lol sorry love the picture, love the imagery of these lines ~

I flick through pages for inspiration, its no use, i fight the feeling of exasperaton
Annoyed with a shadow of anger creeping up and over me, i look on into the frustration

Such a dark depressive opening leading to a warm light ending just like the sun breaking through the clouds, loved it, keep em' coming

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very pleasant though. Very good turn-a-round within the writing. Good write.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Ryzo
Ryzo

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