CONVERSATION EFFECT

CONVERSATION EFFECT

-SADDAM HUSEN

I was living in pain

My happiness was uneven

Calamities for me were certain.

 

Sometimes I think myself a part

Like a thing of waste and out

For me, there was nothing about.

 

My gaits was as I likes

I was absolute as quills

My bucket was sorrowful.

 

Someone cute, one day, asked about it

Amazed I was what I said!

First time I opened my palettes.

 

I was sharing my twingle with an unknown

Gradually a light of joy shown

Magically, surround appeared golden.

 

A little conversation change my surround

I feel energy through talk for heart and mind

All waste things appears beat and kind.

--THANKS DEAR FRIEND

Reviews

[Khushi]

I am so speechless. When did u write this? I'm seeing it like now so late!! I am so sorry.. The poem is just so touching. Thankyou!!

[Saddam]

You can understand why I write that and after effect my poetry. I am very glad now.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Just marvelous How sweet Beautiful sad
and happy at the same time you brought this piece
to life.

I loved these lines. Blessings



I was living in pain

My happiness was uneven

Calamities for me were certain.



Sometimes I think myself a part

Like a thing of waste and out

For me, there was nothing about.



My gaits was as I likes

I was absolute as quills

My bucket was sorrowful.



Someone cute, one day, asked about it

Amazed I was what I said!

First time I opened my palettes.

[00000000000000000000000..]

I see be the better person in a bad time:))))))))))))))))) I loved it thanks:)

[Penny]

It looks like you have dedicated this piece to someone. Very nice write. And indeed conversations are very helpful, they bring out the pain from you and make you cry or stop of tears and make you smile. Well done.

[Saddam]

Well said, sometimes conversation heal our scars. And yes of_course I have dedicated it.

[Rehan Roy]

Rightly said, dear friend..'a little conversation change my surrounding.' The voice of someone who is dear, erodes uneven loads on this heart and brain, of this seemingly moribund life.

[Saddam]

This is real certain happened weeks ago, so I feel I write. Thanks you like it dear. Your poetry is also say lots about.

[Rick Stassi]

Sometimes I think myself apart too! Thanks for sharing... :)

[Saddam]

thanks for reading and giving your precious words my friend for improment my think.. thank you very much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well written and from the heart my friend .Lovely poetry :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear...you are touch my heart... thanks.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are always welcome :)

[MsJewel]

A beautiful tribute to a friend and to friendship. Always a delight to read your words.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

very much pleased to hear you dear friend...

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Yes....sometimes we get someone who make us live again...
A good write...Keep sharing Saad

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend...i am so much glad.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

You are always welcome! :)

[Frieda P]

It's amazing how we're affected by someone else's words, it can change our outlook for the entire day...you said it best.

I think you meant 'twinkle'.....A Twingle is a bike.

[Saddam]

thanks for pointing my shortcoming....i'll be corect that soon. thanks for reading and giving your comments.

[Frieda P]

You're welcome, didn't want some motor oil messing up your luverly poem. :-)

[Saddam]

of course...more i'll take more fluently i'll be fly.

[Frieda P]

You do great, sometimes I have a problem and English is my first language. ;-)

[Saddam]

thank you very much...dear, may i know?