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YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

A Poem by Saddam
"

No matter what the world saying But I am complete with you

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YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

 

Awara, I am

But I am loyal

Into your love

For dreams, we have dreamt.

Banjara, I am

But I am sensible

For our bonds

Promises, we have made.

Deewana, I am

But I am passionate

About our relationship

I want to build happiness extreme.

No matter what the world saying

But I am complete with you.

 

SADDAM HUSEN

06/06/2015

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© 2015 Saddam



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I was grateful to have the translations down below in your comments. The essence of this piece is beautiful and the structure is good. Thanks. I might reword some of the English, but the point certainly comes across so maybe it's better left alone. Thanks.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Your sincerity pour through your words. That tells everything about love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love is the bridge to soul happiness and fulfillment, precious piece :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing work brother. The meeting of two beautiful languages. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot bro.
I'm glad you like it.
Nice blend of languages:) Keep up good work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear for this lovely comment and encouragement.
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A sincere write. I feel the poem will make more sense if you translated in author's notes the meaning of some of these words.
just a thought. :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear for reading it.
Those words means
Awara= Crazy
Banjara= .. read more
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2 Years Ago

:) ahh, thank you :D
I love the last line: But I am complete with you. This would be a lovely gift for that special someone

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend,
I am so much glad.
wow, u took expressing to a whole new level.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
Cool poem Saddam. Something new n refreshing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
I'm pleased..
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Sky
What a way to express your feelings for your love...Absolutely stunning!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

So much pleased hear that friend.
I'm so happy that you like it.
Sky

2 Years Ago

Welcome friend

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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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