The Dice Man

Thats about a man who choose his actions by a dice. Putting different options which varries between silly acts to serious and dangerous ones. And let the dice controls his choices.

 

 

 

 

 

 

My life
Rolls and rolls

With your rolls

No goal no destiny
 
You're my master and you i obey

With your six faces

You completely control my day

 

Door of freedom

You opened to me

Purified my soul

And set me free

 

My heart you cleared

My soul you cheered

My loneliness has disappeared

My boredom you sheared

 

With your choices you owned me

 

With one

You gave me fun

Alone you sent me

Enjoy my life and experience and see

 

With two
I had no clue

That to danger you sent me

And a subversive person you made me

 

With three

From myself you free

Make me a noble man you decided

To give my best you guided

 

With four

You gave me more

Licentious and reckless

Imprudent and careless

 

With five

You made me strive

Working hard

And moving forward

 

With six

Choices swing and mix

To roll you again you chose

And with more options my life flows

 

My life
Rolls and rolls

With your rolls

 

I am the dice man

Author's Note

Inspired by the novel 'The dice man' by 'Luke Rhinehart'

Reviews

Oh beautiful, it's like the feeling of being Caged, within the rutine of life, and all together what makes a regular day so boring, I wrote a poem about this too, for a friend who felt the same pretty much like what you're writing about now, " Caged in You" it's called, what a wonderful write here, such dept, and truth, and honesty. Thanks!

[just is]

Oh wow this is so good!
I really love this write,
amazing flow and rhyme scheme.

[Ruth]

Oh yes! I like this a lot!
I can really feel the effect of such a life! You have created a piece that is thrilling to the senses :)
xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Life is chance and the game of dice is luck and chance. I like the flow of the poem and the good ending. Thank you sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mockingbird]

very innovative poem in form and style. nice piece.

[Jordan's Back]

Damn!! This can be taken in a plethora of ways.... Awesome write

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Creative and gentle.... A nice rhyming ballad....
Every number of a dice was used to a perfect extension....
Making a great poem of a small dice is sure a work of a budding poet....
Well done!

[Amila Jay]

like it alot, great write:-)

[Arielle Ann]

I loved this...it was interesting...let someone control us ..in other words if we let our decisions to control us, life will be much more easier, without any confusions!

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love the concept. The dice that rolls and rolls, such is life! A wonderful write! Very creative!