Trust Me

Trust Me

A Poem by Sahar moonlight

She said I am able to

Destroy you both



Hearts answered

We’re filled with unlimited love

Nothing can change us



Souls replied

We’re connected forever

Nothing can separate us



She said

I am Doubt

I am Suspect



They

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© 2012 Sahar moonlight



Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
Left with no words

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Lovely, Sad and true. Really good...
:D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
What a striking message!
The hurt is obvious, the passion, beautiful to behold!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Priscilla Sayers

5 Years Ago

My pleasure:)
Wonderful write! Sadly, suspicion can ruin the best relationship and doubt, indeed, destroy love bit by bit. Trust is a fragile thing...
Wonderfully penned with those personifications!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very creative i like it

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creative writing .. It's great :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A cleverly written poem...I love the idea here...Well said. Great work!
:)))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even without words as you say, you still invoked a good amount of emotion in each readers heart and mind. This is another seeming simple yet complex write I read from you. Well penned yet again. A success from a poet's den. ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful personification, this is how a relationship should be, undisturbed by all the things that could side track your love for each other. So much has been conveyed in those few words, written rather wonderfully. Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great strong write :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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