She's Beautiful

She's beautiful like a morning or like a sober night breeze.

She's the cold drops of winter rain,

the silver lining of clouds,

She's in the mountains,

in the windstorm,

She's the silent breeze of sober nights,

in the snowfall,

She's in the oceans,

in every sea,

She's in the trees, 

in every leaf

She exist in the morning dew,

on every petal,

on every flower,

She's in the skies,

as my sun, 

my moon,

She's in the stars,

illuminating the sky,

She's the reason I breath,

in air,

I inhale,

She's love in me,

my everything,

in everything,

She's in my silence,

in my smile,

She's the glory,

my reason to rejoice,

She's love,

my consent to live,

She's life,

my protection,

my vow to myself,

my castle,

She's in my passion,

my desire,

She's the cold drops of winter rain,

the silver lining of clouds,

My Everything..

My Love..  . 

Reviews

[Serena Clara]

Beautiful portrayal of love. The list structure is a brilliant way to show how deep feelings for a person can run through your mind. I really like this poem and the peace it brings. Well done!

[Yellow Butterfly]

She... Is loved.!


Nicely penned!

[Kes]

This poem has so much amazing imagery. :)
It's a really sweet poem. The subject and message are lovely. I hope, if this is written for someone in particular, that she reads this. It's gorgeous.
Thanks for sharing.
K

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very pretty, but there are a lot of grammatical errors. With a little polish this will be a perfect poem. :-)

[Mockingbird]

sounds like lyrics to a song. beautiful words to a beautiful woman. excellent job.

[Serena]

all i have to say is: "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!"
I love this poem a lot :) good job

[thelauraslate]

Beautiful!
"my consent to live"
That line is my favorite.

[Pax]

whole poem explains everything of a person who is very much inlove. wonderfully expressed thoughts of love. enjoyed it.