Reality

Reality

A Poem by Sam Freeland
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requires trust

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Everything we do
is a factor of how we feel
The degree we are aware
tells us what is real
 
Since every mind is different
reality follows close behind
giving meaning to our truth
and whatever we hope to find
 
One must try to accept
that truth can vary this way
So connections to others
will enjoy being okay
 
While many do not care
to share in this blessed state
Trying to go life alone
will bring an unhappy fate
 
When one is an island
with a rocky shore
It will say to family and friends
 you must be only a bore
 
The best course for them
is to stay far away
With troubles of their own
they won't be playing your way
 
Families get in this mode
from not wanting to try
When they learn to distrust
they never know why
 
Seeing this unhappy fault
there is something you can do
Be an example of trust
by showing others it's true
 
12/12/09
 

© 2009 Sam Freeland



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Posted 6 Years Ago


A very readable and enjoyable poem about truths. Why is it so hard for us to follow this sort of wisdom? Maybe it takes too long to accept it. Awesome!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well done. 5/5 stars

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such wisdom in your words. We need patience and kindness for our family and friends. Each soul and desire is different. Need more or less. A outstanding poem. Ending made poem perfect.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this and the feelings behind it. There is a lot of truth in this. This is very well written and such an amamzing flow to it as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sam Freeland
Sam Freeland

Chocorua, NH



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