"I want to Erase..."

"I want to Erase..."

Reviews

[Linear]

The only trouble with erasing words, is somebody will rewrite them, is it possible to change others simply through our own will, can we perhaps legislate against those cruel hearts, those who thrive on war and bloodshed?
I think not, and so brutality will remain and some will be favoured while others more deserving are left far far behind..............lovely words :O)

[Judy Ponceby]

So sad to face those things. Well written.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Pain tears the soul, if only we could stop pain from ripping us apart. Emotionally written and a great poem

[Audrey Howitt]

The pain in the poem speaks volumes. Well done!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

incredibly style

[Ashesh]

we should seek Truth, everything will align itself behind it-- prizes, love, perfection are obvious then, i guess. oblitrate those things that is not us. in that way we are purifying ourselves. to me purity is perfection. good read, thx for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Not so easy to erase pain. I believe we need have pain and disappointment to understand pleasure and sweetness. I like the desire and description in this poem. I like the ending. You made your point loud and clear. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

This is a passionate write.. I can feel the emotion you put behind it. I think there are so many things in life we wish we could erase.. You penned these emotions well.. :)x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

How refreshingly painful, slightly re-kept of soul, a good read, pert imagery, almost lonely in the delivery, well done.