Might Force

Might Force

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Rhyme, short

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What a mighty force is flood water

Coursing on its way to the sea

Forcing ones way backward impossibility

Carried away in the flow easiest to be

 

What about you and what about me

What will our course be this day

What course will attraction drawing be

Right, wrong, straddle the fence, play

 

Decisions, decisions what choice today

Help my eyes be focused on the prize

The prize of the higher calling stay

Stay focused don't ever become unwise

 


© 2010 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick



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Interesting description of our lives. Sometimes we are carried along with the currents and we are always faced with choices. The image of a floodwater makes me think that sometimes we don't have a choice, at least not the choice of swimming against the mighty force of a raging flood.

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow.;this is brilliant as you have captured the everyday struggles of decision making...the ability to stay focussed on the Higher Calling....beautiful

blessings
vincent

Posted 7 Years Ago


i honistly didn't really get this so im just gonna give you a 100

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2010
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