Heart in a Cage

Waiting on the cruel reality.

Heart in a Cage
Written by: Samantha Ryan
Aka Sammie

I put my heart in a cage,
ready to turn the page.
Ready to stop gettin my heart handed back to me,
So just wait and see.

What I do next will amaze,
Put all the photos in a pile and just set them on fire consumed in a blaze.

My heart in a cage,
As it is consumed by deep rage.

My heart is in a cage and the key belongs to you.
So just do whatever it is you are gonna do.

Get it over with,
please just be quick,
The sounds of the clock drives me insane as it goes tick, tick.

Oh you wretched clock,
Can't you say anything but Tick- tock?

If you do then please speak your mind,
Because I keep searching for words and not one can I find.

I feel as if I could lose my mind.
So please Mr. Clock I beg you please be kind.
Remember by touch, my kiss, the way we just fit, there is not a truer love you could find.

I belong with you and you with me,
How did your eyes become so blind that your cannot see.
See how things were meant to be.

But I will wait,
wait for you to speak and see if it was fate.

My heart I put in a cage,
wondering what may be the next stage,
. I am not ready to turn the page.

Reviews

[Timothy Ryan]

I liked the idea of this poem, but not how it was presented. Some of the rhymes were repeated, which weakened the rest of the poem, because it felt like it was saying the same thing, just in a different place. It felt forced for rhymes in a few places. Lines like "What I do next will amaze..." felt unnatural, because the language was sacrificed so the rhyme could work. You have good ideas, but I would work on strengthening how they're said, so the work is as strong as your message. thank you for sharing this with us.

[samparks,sam]

This is nice dedicate feelings. But the heart needs fresh air, be free from a cage with good advise not need turn page, Nice poem you write

[Inject Positivity]

So beautifully painful Sammie...

I loved the way you projected that your heart is in a cage, which wants get free, but the key of that cage belongs the person whom you dearly love... It always sounds very melancholic when you asked that person to speak out something which will tell you about the relationship but the person hardly speaks... A loving relationship slowly slowly fading away...

Well constructed with a touching concept... Superbly done...

Sincerely
Dhiman