Stormy Weather

I think the fact that today was supposed to be all epic wind and storms but it wasn't was the mane inspiration for this poem, then there is my usual "i don't belong here" stuff

i don't need the sunshine in my pale grey scottish sky

the rain will keep me warm

the wind wont let me die

you might scream your "freezing"

but admit, you like believing

there is more than they can see, beyond the hill

I may have never lived, I may have never loved

but that doesn't mean im any less than you

the world that hid me from the light

will find out i was always right

there's more to life than make up, boys and shoes

I dont need the sunshine in my pale grey scottish sky

the rain will help me think clear

the wind helps me ask why

i know i scream im "freezing"

but really, i like believing

there's something more than this, beyond the hill

I'm no atheist, I'm agnostic. I hope that there's a god
but organized religion just ain't for me
love will not destroy you, romance isn't dead
But if i hide for too long, thats what it will be.

I will be the sunshine in my pale grey scottish sky

the wind will give me hope

the rain will let me cry

the earth's quick and raspy breathing

some things are worth believing

and somethings waiting for me....beyond the hill

Reviews

[Mashairi]

the words in this piece speak seemed to have been chosen with passion. you can tell this is from the heart. well done, my friend :)

[RedInk524]

Wow, i love it. I love the repitition, rhyme, and pattern you used. You used weather in a very symbolic way that is easily related to. This is going into my favorites, good job.

[dead man talking]

I llived in scotland for a few years and loved it,such a beautiful place(well ok not all of it) ,fine poem young man