Mother Earth and Father Sky

A lullaby inspired by nature.

Oh, Mother Earth,

and Father Sky,

oh, things that crawl,

and things that fly,

when the sun goes down

we all go to sleep

and the grasshoppers will chirp

and sing their songs as no one

else makes a peep.

Oh, Mother Earth,

and Father Sky,

we will wait to wake

until the sun dips above the skyline,

Oh, Mother Earth,

and Father Sky,

we bid you goodbye,

and go to collect dreams

in good time,

until the early morning.

Author's Note

I am open to any kind of criticism, harsh or otherwise. We need criticism in order to grow and become better at what we do. If you have any questions about this poem, or any of my other poems, or about me in general, feel free to ask.

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

well written, could be please if you could add more imagery between the vivid words that written.

mother earth create the depth of blue ocean and carves beauty of the hills like a sketch on a canvass

thanks for share :)

[TheSeaOfWoe]

Thank you. I could have made it more detailed, and it was originally meant to be a lullaby, so, in other words, short and sweet, but I suppose I could revise it and include some of the things you mentioned. Thanks for the review!