A life's Game

We are all players in life's challenges

A life's Game

Games is a competition,

It needs determination,

It requires meditation,

And a positive perception.

 

Games could be tiring,

But still are interesting,

It is extraordinarily something,

that makes life worth-living.

 

Entering the world of games,

Players are both great and tame,

Where player’s goals are just the same.

 

In games, when you’ll enter,

You can be called a loser,

Nor can be announced as a winner.

 

Our game start ever since we are born,

Life had given as the chance to became a war-torn,

And when you start playing, you’ll heard laughter and mourn.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Asra Hakak]

beautifully written, expressed and explained!
well a little advise you need to edit the first line I guess,
it should be ''Game is a competition''
in place of ''Games is as competition''
it would make better sense and the flow of the rhythm would become smooth .
~Asra

[SecludedFantasy]

Oh Thank you for the advice.. Sure I'll edit it sooner :)

[Insight "MH"]

I like the rhythm. Nicely done.

Insight.

[SecludedFantasy]

Thank you for that comment :)

[Hiroshi Masters]

I really like it.. You are really good at rhyming too. Fairly enjoyed it too! Keep it up :)

[SecludedFantasy]

Oh thank you :)