I'm Done

The sun comes up,
Burns my eyes
Burns my soul
You come into view,
Kick me when I’m down
Kick me to the side
Falling to the ground,
Unable to stay up
Unable to fight back
Splotches of blood taint the dust,
Dripping from my wounds
Dripping from my torn up heart
All I asked was for help,
A simple question
A simple request
You couldn’t even do that,
Show me the compassion you promised
Show me that you truly cared
Lying is all that you do,
That anyone has ever done
That becomes just as addictive as this
This is what you do to me,
Make me break my skin
Make me break my promises
To the only ones that really care,
They all think that I’m fine
They all don’t know that I’m not
I want that to be true,
To feel secure and warm
To feel loved by someone for once
But that will never happen,
My dreams won’t come true
My dreams are only that
I’m losing light fast,
It’s fading into the darkness
It’s being overcome by sorrow and hatred
You told me that I could trust you,
Told me to listen
Told me that you were different
You were no different than any of them,
Again and again you hurt me
Again and again I hurt myself because of you
Well you don’t have to worry anymore,
I’m done with all this nonsense
I’m done playing this fucked up game

Reviews

[pinpen]

Wow, so powerful and well written. Simply outstanding. Loved the last line.

[Noche]

A piece like this can only really come from someone who knows the ins and outs of what it means to lose someone dear, to be betrayed, or feel lost themselves. It's a terrible feeling, that kind of pain, but from it works of art like this can come to be. It's an amazing piece to say the least. The heart is an instrument and you're one hell of a musician.