Ambiance du soir - Evening ambiance - Abendstimmung

Ambiance du soir - Evening ambiance - Abendstimmung

A Poem by Seerose
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An experiment: a trilingual poem. français, English, deutsch

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Les masses d'eau couvrent les pierres prudemment,
the flowers close their tired eyes,
die Bäume flüstern sich einen letzten Abendgruß zu,
le soleil salue son frère la lune,
and delights the world with a last gold-rose haze,
deine weichen Arme halten jeden Schatten fern,
maintenant nous souhaitons la bienvenue à la nuit.
    

       
 

© 2010 Seerose



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German is my everyday language so I appreciate what you're writing here, and it's very evocative.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

english is my primary~I speak a ittle french ~ and what i can glean by stirring my imaginings to string it together is an absolutely lovely saturation of smooth evening tide commencing~

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2010
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Tags: romantic, nature, evening, sunset

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Seerose
Seerose

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