Bleeding Heart

Bleeding Heart

A Poem by Wolf
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I took all of the emotion that i was filling about my ex and utilized it in the making of this poem

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Everything about you sickens me;

 

making me queezy every time i think of you.

 

Your love was a lie i cant beleave i trusted you;

 

now I lay here in this dark surcofficus.

 

Forever barried 6 feet under;

 

never to feel the warmth of anothers touch.

 

Your lies have forsaken me;

 

all emotions locked deep within my darkend soul.

 

And my bloody heart torn into millions of peaces;

 

shall never beat again.

 

My love that was a gift to you;

 

and the momment you took his hand;

 

You shatterd all possibilitys of happieness.

 

 

 

© 2010 Wolf


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Wolf
I hope you enjoy yet another of my poems

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You express your emotions well. Loss of love is hard, but you will go on.

Posted 8 Years Ago


When the heart is bleeding. We have no desire to see someone we lost content. I like the strength in the poem. A very strong ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


cool poem i love ir

Posted 8 Years Ago


Despite spelling errors, a good nasty poem. I can see the frustration you used to create it and I can picture an angel of death hovering over the one who killed her not knowing what horrible fate awaits him. Nice job Wolf.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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