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My Paradise

My Paradise

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror




The very Earth beneath

shakes and trembles

At my feet

Horizons break

Desert meets Sky



There is no escape

From the domination

Always taking and creating

These rapes and shakes

To what end



My eyes dart and wander

Like a bird

Broken and lost

Searching for something familiar

In the land and the frost



The hint of a life lost

Cannot touch this realm

Standing amongst the numbers

I heard someone yell

Welcome to paradise 

the seventh ring of HELL



© 2017 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror



Author's Note

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
Violence is the Name of the seventh ring. This piece introduces something I survived but it is just an introduction. I have barely given you a slight view. It is however empowering for me to write about, remember and let go. The most amazing thing I left with the day I left the gate of Paradise was Strength. A Strength that surprised, enveloped and endured into the journey outside the gate. The second trip to Paradise was insanity I was taken back for 93 days. Those 93 days were harder than the three years I had just done. Why? Because a small taste of Freedom. That is when I wrote Freedom because nothing else mattered. Again the day came to leave the gate. I left with a strength I had never knew I contained. If your still reading Thank you for that and God Bless.

Sheer Terror


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This is great, nice job. I like your creativity. :))

Posted 4 Months Ago


I can really relate the way your rhymes flow & the way you space your lines, your poems are great to read & inpire such emotion. I got strong sense of a time of destitution, I hope it was empowering to write! Well shared x


Posted 5 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

5 Months Ago

Yes it has been empowering and I am working on writing more in depth on the subject. This experienc.. read more
great write about a living hell. they say that what doesn't kill us makes us stronger but sometimes i wonder about that.

Posted 6 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

6 Months Ago

In the end Strength will bow to Wisdom. Pete, thank you for reading and reviewing I apreciate you. .. read more
Really great, Sheer Kind :-)
What can one do without freedom..it is like living hell..Heart felt.
I like how you keep sharing your life pieces through your poems..
Courageous write

Posted 8 Months Ago


quite interesting, & philosophically very intense. liked the way how you talked 'bout the brutality of this wicked world, & nicely spelled down your thoughts in heartfelt words. great job!

Posted 10 Months Ago


sounds like it would make a great book !

Posted 10 Months Ago


I like how personal this piece is to the writer.It shows in your words.Great job

Posted 10 Months Ago


As a poem It is good you have composed it in simple language. the second point is that you have done nice job to mention what happened to you clearly. well written.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 10 Months Ago


I think you did a really nice job on this. I enjoyed reading this-- you are a great writer. Keep up the good work.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Months Ago


Your close, very very close. And oh so on the right track.ill admit that there's a little tweaking here and there that can be done but otherwise it was good.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago



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TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror

PHOENIX, AZ



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When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..

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