The Game I Hate

There's this game

The game I hate.

He wants me to play,

For I am his bait.

He tells me it's okay

To play his game.

For my despair,

I am to blame.

He says if I disobey,

He'll make the game hurt.

I don't want to hurt,

So I lift up my skirt.

He says it's okay

If he touches me.

He told me

I have to agree.

I hate when

He touches me there.

It's not right,

It's too much to bare.

But I have to keep quiet,

Or he'll play with another.

I don't want him to,

So I do like before.

I lay down,

So he can have fun.

I try to get away,

But he reaches for the gun.

When he's done,

I run to my room and cry.

Right now all I want

Is to just die.

Then I think,

What if he were dead?

I could take his gun,

And shoot him in the head.

Maybe I could

Finally think straight.

Maybe then I wont have to play

The game I hate.

Reviews

[Justin Robben]

While tragic in content, I will focus on the writing and not the atrocity...

Beautiful. This is a beautiful piece, in its way.

It held my focus. It lured a very base emotion out of my being.

The source of inspiration is terrible, but the way you've captured it, and nor control it with these words, is brilliant.

Bravo!

[NotGoodEnough]

Thank you so much....that means a lot to me

[sassy grizzly bear]

Well this is something that it is and K

[Abby L.]

I agree with most of these reviews! Lets shoot 'em!
This piece is straight forward, and I really like this. Actually I hate this very much, but you did a great job expressing that :).
Thank you for this submission
::Abby::

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words. You took the reader to place of the hated place. Made the place come alive and the anger known by the reader. I did like the ending. Sometime the gun can be transfer and the prey become the predator. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[untimely stories]

Grrrrr!....no one will ever do that to you ever again.....I wanna kill whoever did that to you

[NotGoodEnough]

You won't kill anyone...I can't lose you to prison...

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I WILL HELP!

[NotGoodEnough]

No one is going to go to prison!!! I can't lose anymore people!!!

[Ena Lona Kendra]

Trust me we will not be going to prision...

[Ena Lona Kendra]

........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Um can I shoot your dad? or who ever did that? I'll end the game. :/the fact that someone would do that to such an amazing girl like you really pisses me off. Is it true? he did do all that stuff?

[NotGoodEnough]

It was my step dad and grandpa....it's very true...

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I will kill them all. Ray will help me

[NotGoodEnough]

No you won't

[untimely stories]

i will help

[Ena Lona Kendra]

exactly. Lirassia... We love you thats why we want to kill them.

[NotGoodEnough]

You spelled my name wrong

[Ena Lona Kendra]

well I usually say Lissa

[NotGoodEnough]

Larissa*****

[sassy grizzly bear]

KKKKKKKKKK