Bliss

On this day

sealed with a kiss

the wedded bliss

begins.

Anew

refreshed

entrenched

as One

their Union

shall be Blessed

as always and ever shall be.

On this day

sealed with a kiss

the wedded bliss

begins, Anew.

Love

Divines the Air

the words are shared

to bind them together always,

I do.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a real gem. The last line of the poem really shook me up. In my mind I was watching the ceremony through the speakers eyes, but in the end...those two words existed in a duality. It was the icing on the cake for the new couple, but that was more in the background. I felt as if the speaker was renewing their own vows silently to themself. That's only how it affected me personally, but that made it end with a huge impact.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such kind, prophetic words. Much thanks.

[Judy]

True..the last part really touched me. I pray that my wedding will be blessed too

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love this it takes me back in time to perhaps my wedding day or others

[hanir]

This is lovely! Creatively written.

[Stephen]

Nice poem, how beautifully you express the few loving moments of your life in the few words! Lovely! You know what? We never know what tom. brings for each of us but we are already aware of present what it has already brought us to live with .. we just have to look over the blues finding something new ..anew in all days. I adore this write. I'd look forward reading your stuffs!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Thank you...this was written for two friends who were married recently...I was honored to prepare the flowers for the occasion and be the Maid of Honor

[Stephen]

Your welcome .. Okay ..well, yeah..I just got that feelings when I read these lines ...
On this day
sealed with a kiss
the wedded bliss
begins, Anew.
I'd thought that it was about you .. Oh thanks for making concept clear .. lol By the way, it's really very well penned and am sure, your friends'd have embraced you having such a beautiful gift from you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing like the start of two souls becoming one with the harmony of love. A blissful poem indeed.