Memoirs of a Broken Heart

It speaks for itself

Memoirs of a Broken Heart

 

Today my heart begins to die

I hear its moans, I hear its cries

No one cares it dies but me

the pain so bad, I'm so bloody

 

My chest tore open wide and now so horrifically exposed

that inside my bleeding heart is all that ever shows

So now I hang it by a by a string as it dangles so helpless in the air

No chance for a speedy recovery and never a chance for its repair

 

So hopeless as it knows it will never again feel

from all the wounds that it's encountered and tries to conceal

So if you should someday happen to merrily pass it by

please break it a little more to end its pain, then slowly watch it die

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

my heart begins to die..today..see the moans ..hear the cries..no one ever care but me..so much pain..so much hurt
it tore open wide..bleeding will show to every passers by..my heart hangs on a string..no it will not recover ..it wont repair
and yes i will never feel you love again..ever again..so if you see me like that ..please even break me more..than just watch me ..slowly die..
how wonderful ..this was written with great emotions..excuse me for playing a little with the dear words..for i loved those words so much ..they liked to dance again in my hands ..to see if they could ever give some more beauty..but in your hands they were just great and i loved it all
wonderful work

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful poem, very well written and a pleasure to read.

[Tina Kline]

A very sad poem. You wrote it very well 'cause the feelings come
across very powerfully. And it was so easy to read as well, which
I like. I can get a feeling from the poem without struggling to
read it. Excellent poem!

Tina