I love you

I love you

A Poem by Dreamer
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Dedicated To My Love <3

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 I know that I shouldn't; but I can't help myself:

I love you, and that's the truth.

 

Every second of every day I long to be with you, I think of you and can't help but smile, when you're not near me I miss you more than anything:

I miss your smile,

I miss your laugh,

I miss your voice,

I miss your eyes,

 

Even though I shouldn't have;

I fell in love with you.

I don't know why,

I don't know how,

I just did.

 

Now when I see you, I miss your smile.

when I see your smile, I want your hug.

When I hug you, I want your kiss.

 

Yes it's true, though I shouldn't:

I truly love you <3


© 2013 Dreamer



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Is it wrong to fall in love ? No, not at all. It never is. What can support this then if some people feel it is 'wrong' to fall in love ? Because then it is not love. It is lust or the feeling or desire of having someone protect them, or they want to protect someone, or they want a parent figure, or they want to be a parent figure to someone.

Or maybe they want to be with the person because there are benefits, things this person can offer them they cannot provide for themselves.

Then it is called a co-dependent relationship.
http://bit.ly/9WMEsS

So, if you are in love, and it really is just pure loving love, it is always - ALWAYS just right - to fall right into it - everytime. :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your comments (: I really do love him, even though I'm afraid he might not feel the same .. read more
dw817

4 Years Ago

You have but to ask ... Take care. :)
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

if only it were that simple, thanks... you too (:



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I was smiling the whole time, when I was Reading this.
Well done, it's Beautiful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

why thank you (:
I love this poem, so romantic!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you (:
this is a very nice write ,I really like it thank you for penning

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thanks... I appreciate it. your welcome
This is very nice, I really enjoyed it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Ryan!
this one's the best..
Especially the last lines are very very good..
Keep writing you've a burning spirit for the purest feeling 'love'..
So better pen it down in the form of your lovely poems untill it goes away..
Thanks for sharing..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

Thank you fellow writer (:
This is beautiful, stunning even. You've written such a beautiful poem. The feeling is relatable to loads!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

why thank you very much. (:
A beautiful poem of love. When love overtake us. We have no chance. I like the flow and the positive feel to the words. A good ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Why, thank you very much for your positive review (:
It is greatly appreciated!
⊰ℛℛ⊱
Is it wrong to fall in love ? No, not at all. It never is. What can support this then if some people feel it is 'wrong' to fall in love ? Because then it is not love. It is lust or the feeling or desire of having someone protect them, or they want to protect someone, or they want a parent figure, or they want to be a parent figure to someone.

Or maybe they want to be with the person because there are benefits, things this person can offer them they cannot provide for themselves.

Then it is called a co-dependent relationship.
http://bit.ly/9WMEsS

So, if you are in love, and it really is just pure loving love, it is always - ALWAYS just right - to fall right into it - everytime. :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your comments (: I really do love him, even though I'm afraid he might not feel the same .. read more
dw817

4 Years Ago

You have but to ask ... Take care. :)
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

if only it were that simple, thanks... you too (:
it's a good write! (: knowing who this is about, i will not say, for no nice words would come from it. he screwed with you, and that's not allowable in my book.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quiet Child

4 Years Ago

you may see yourself in another light than how others see you. this will explain the varying opinion.. read more
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

I see myself in no light, rather all I seem to see is darkness. yeah, you're odd...but hell, everyon.. read more
Quiet Child

4 Years Ago

sure.........
i know the feeling sweetie, it sucks. very good expression through your writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

aw why thank you very much (:
beautiful dreamer

4 Years Ago

you are very welcome!
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

I appreciate it!!

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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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