Your feelings for me...

Your feelings for me...

A Poem by Dreamer

I truly want to know,

do you love me so?

 

Do you love me the way I love you?

Do you think of me when you're all alone?

 

I long to be in your arms,

do you wish for me to be?

 

Do you imagine your future?

do I have a vital role in it?

 

You know how I feel about you, I tell you every day

but tell me, do you feel the same way?


© 2013 Dreamer



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The question of love leave us with mystery. I believe only true answer is time together. Real love survive the good and the bad day. I like the the flow of thoughts and the questioning of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

It surely does. I agree that time together is the answer but we aren't allowed around each other so .. read more



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Ooh I really like this one, GREAT!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you (:
It is a good expression of feelings....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you very much
everybody has asked this question at least one time in their life, very well done :P

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

thank you, Ryan!
that was a little lighter than the poem i just read of yours..but I too like this poem as it has theme which is always preferable for me and that line of the poem did steal my attention....
Thanks for sharing..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dreamer

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review!
The question of love leave us with mystery. I believe only true answer is time together. Real love survive the good and the bad day. I like the the flow of thoughts and the questioning of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

3 Years Ago

It surely does. I agree that time together is the answer but we aren't allowed around each other so .. read more
good rhyming......................

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thanks dear (:
Quiet Child

4 Years Ago

your welcome (:
The question we all ask in a relationship...does the other person feel the same as we do? Only time and actions will prove the answer. Honestly emotive. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing... i appreciate it! (:
Watch for the actions because they speak more than the words you seek.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you very much Pete!
Really nice flow, and rhyme. Great write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you Peter, I appreciate it!
Ah that longing that never really goes away; well captured here!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you very much Inda! I appreciate it (:

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Dreamer

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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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