Your feelings for me...

I truly want to know,

do you love me so?

 

Do you love me the way I love you?

Do you think of me when you're all alone?

 

I long to be in your arms,

do you wish for me to be?

 

Do you imagine your future?

do I have a vital role in it?

 

You know how I feel about you, I tell you every day

but tell me, do you feel the same way?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The question of love leave us with mystery. I believe only true answer is time together. Real love survive the good and the bad day. I like the the flow of thoughts and the questioning of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dreamer]

It surely does. I agree that time together is the answer but we aren't allowed around each other so I must find a different answer. Thanks for your review!

[Anand Sehgal]

Do you imagine your future?
do I have a vital role in it?

so honest question. really awesome :)

[Dreamer]

why, thank you very much!!! (:

[dw817]

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Sometimes all the questions of the universe can be answered with a simple gesture. It lets the other one know you truly do care for them and that they are not merely a passing shadow in the hallways.

You must ASK them. I know this can be terrifying, embarrassing, and maybe even a little humiliating if you don't consider yourself a firm speaker. But - you may never know - until you ASK.

[Dreamer]

Thanks for your comments, I truly appreciate your advice. However, as much as I would love to ask him... it's complicated. We're not exactly allowed to speak to each other... :/

[dw817]

Not allowed ? By your parents say so ?

[Dreamer]

precisely, well my dad says so. His parents won't let him speak to me either :(

[dw817]

Sounds like a regular Romeo & Juliet, and I am basing that truly upon the story which was the same. Juliet Capulet fell in love with Romeo Montague and their parents forbade them from seeing each other.

While the story here ends in a tragedy, it is a bit of a fairy tale, although an important one to be sure.

Can I ask why yours and their parents don't want you to see each other ?

[Dreamer]

Yeah it is like Romeo and Juliet in a way... and i will message you about it.

[dw817]

OK, welp, taking a break for lunch. Going to have some mushroom soup, when I return I'll check my private message box, and start to get the novel of Barrier ready.

[Dreamer]

alrighty!!

[GeekGenius]

Holy! I just love this! The feelings in it are strong, great job!

[Dreamer]

Thank you very much! (:
I truly appreciate it!!

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful song and feelings...Bravo

[Dreamer]

Thank you for another positive review Sami! (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Dreamer]

I appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

:)..............

[Dreamer]

If only i knew if he felt that way too....

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)................

[Dreamer]

:/ ....................

[Sami Khalil]

:).......................

[beautiful dreamer]

i like the rhyme scheme! i've written many a poem like this sometimes the answer is yes sometimes its no, just dont give up until you find out!!

[Dreamer]

Thank you very much! I always enjoy your positive reviews!!
I am hoping the answer is yes, and I'm determined to find out...