Lies and Changes

  Gently

Unnaware

Subtle

Changes

Everywhere

.

Invisible

Barely

There

.

Greater

Meanings

Feelings

To Share

.

Can't

Deny

In

The

End

It's

All

A

Lie

.

 

Author's Note

Just trying something new, what are your thoughts?

Reviews

[Savior of Time]

This is really good, I feel the truth in this. Amazing, LadyInk!

[LadyInk]

Thank you!! :)

[Savior of Time]

you're welcome! :D

[Wolfwind]

With the shape of the poem in conjunction with the words, I felt like this might be a whispy ghost like entity that we only see out of the corner of our eyes, but can never see straight on. Then we start thinking and asking ourselves if what we are seeing and hearing is even real, so we question it's existence in the first place.

I great little piece of poetry! That's what I saw from it! =)
Aaron

[LadyInk]

I like your way of seeing this, itmademethink about again and I couldn't help but to agree .. Thanks for the nice review!!