Morning skyline

Wash-up concrete sardines

wishing for breathing space;

they try to tickle the sky,

but no sound it makes

Renegade clouds try to color

the misty horizon,

but they fail.

The coastguard wakes up

sleepy, rebellious waves

but they wished that they worked

the late shift.

A lonely tower

jealously eyes

an arrogant sky-scraper - 

their glances getting lost

in mid-morning traffic.

The sky smiles, eventually - 

crimson tainted sunlight

sighs that morning is gone - 

until tomorrow.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ominous skyline presented witht he shade of beauty ...i feel conflicted in the reading ...could be so many mysterious and dangerous places of heart mind soul and geography .. bids me to read it again when finished :)
E.

[Eggplant]

This is a beautiful piece of work. It made me feel like I was there. It really made my day. Thank you so much for writing this! I ask you, please write more poems like this. I cannot wait for more.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words shared. I liked the way you used the description. Gave life to the artwork. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ardra]

The sky smiles, eventually -
crimson tainted sunlight
sighs that morning is gone -
until tomorrow.

:) sounds very much like a poem made for cities like dubai :P hehe i enjoyed reading it

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lol....thanks for your review....did you not know that in Dubai even sunlight is stuck in traffic? ;)

[Ardra]

how do u know so much :P
hehe yes.... i know...