As I Sail the Midnight Sky

As I Sail the Midnight Sky

A Poem by Adam M. Snow

I see the moon, smiling down as I sail the midnight sky. Among the starry night I'll drown in the sea of stars, I


As I Sail the Midnight Sky 
Written by Adam M. Snow 

I see the moon, smiling down 
as I sail the midnight sky. 
Among the starry night I'll drown 
in the sea of stars, I 
will sail my ship onward pass 
the endless morrow, endless space, 
where my journey ends. Alas! 
Where in slumber I embrace. 

© 2017 Adam M. Snow

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Wow, the rhyme scheme was very well done! It was simple yet thoughtful in its wording.

Posted 9 Months Ago

You inspired me to write my latest just now just by reading yours thanks so much

Posted 1 Year Ago

Gentle and good words shared. I liked the journey to peaceful sleep. Thank you Adam for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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The moon, the stars, the sea—you have all my favorite things in one poem. Beautifully crafted, Adam.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Almost as if the image shown was made to fit the words, or the words to fit the image. Masterfully short without the sudden dead end drop-off found in other poems of similar length.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Your writing has an almost dreamlike quality. The images you create with your words are wonderful and leave me pondering the message long after the poem is read.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Be it under the stars in slumber or just stars in your dreams, the journey is endless, but fruitful. a lovely composed write and the picture plays with the imagery suggested.

Posted 1 Year Ago

a beautiful description,i wonder what all the ancient mariners saw at night looking at the stars

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on July 9, 2017
Last Updated on July 9, 2017
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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ

"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..


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