Apparition Despair

Apparition Despair

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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My ghostly apparition doest not be seen, by thy child of my ghostly fiend.

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Apparition Despair
By: Adam M. Snow

My ghostly apparition doest not be seen,
by thy child of my ghostly fiend.
But though the twinkle lights despair me;
my wake be that of a lore of me.

© 2011 Adam M. Snow



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You touched feeling good within this, I love the words you chose and the simple amount of space used for the poem, just to say enough. Nice.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful poem!

Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nice mystically , reminds me of Casper the friendly ghost. Anyways well done on a nice short sweet and interesting poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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its so sad :( aww ghostly friends how we enjoy thier company but its sad when they have to go especially when they're the only ones we have.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sad, dark, and hauntingly beautiful at the same time, all in 30 words. Amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A interesting tale in the short poem. I try to stay away from ghostly fiends or friends. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Doesth not be seen? My Ye Old English isn't very polished, but I'm pretty sure that's not a word. Like, maybe 78% sure. Or maybe 82%. Everything else is pretty solid, though.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


What aperitions haunt you my friend, wasted chances badly choosen words or love lost through a combination of both.

Whatever the reasoning I love the feeling of sadness, keep em' coming

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Posted 5 Years Ago


interesting. i like it.

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Added on December 5, 2011
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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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