Only We Lie

Single and lonely flower in a whole tree
A solitary bird in an infrangible cage
Or the bird that flies aloof in the sky
A moon that is odd one out
Among the sparkling strangers
A lonely sun that burns and dies everyday
A road that no one travels
A miserable and inarticulate love
A soul without its soul mate
And a poem without any readers
Loneliness is not a fun
But it’s a truth
In the end we all are lonely
Only we lie…

Reviews

[Ambra Celeste]

A lovely poetic reflection on the feeling of loneliness which we all experiences even if we are surrounded by people. Softly written. :)

[William Wapi]

This is a really good poem. Created some pretty good images in my head.

[DCT ponderings]

A moon that is odd one out
Among the sparkling strangers
.......
A soul without its soul mate
And a poem without any readers

Beautiful. We come into this world alone and go out the same way. Lonely indeed. Great write. This is truth revealed.

[Akshat♥]

I can totally relate to this piece of yours..
Lovely write..Keep writing!!

[Courtney]

A simple poem that appears enrapturing.. I love the idea that you present in this poem, and I love how you pushed your point across. My favourite line was;
"A moon that is odd one out
Among the sparkling strangers "
It gave a beautiful image. With this sort of imagery in your work, it gives beauty to a rather sad piece, speaking of loneliness as well as showing the other inanimate beings in which can also experience this feeling. Nicely penned :)

[SyberRose]

I enjoyed reading your words...nicely done...Syberrose

[Sami Khalil]

"A moon that is odd one out
Among the sparkling strangers
A lonely sun that burns and die everyday."
That is some good poetry...:)