Empty time frame

Circular pool of water,

The time frame is  so empty

It's so much slower than I anticipated it to be.

There's wind in my favor

but the sun poses against me.

Time is putting me on trial as I stare off into my reflection

The tiny ripples of water blurs my face... I see someone else

Someone else looking into my eyes

someone with sadistically evil eyes

and a choppy grin that makes me shiver.

How long do we stare at the clouds until we notice its shape?

Dragon, to heart, to tall sky scrapers, all with the same form

of cotton candy , soft white, purple and grey.

Most are blinded by ignorance, but I'm blinded by freedom and fear.

The wind have lost me and now Its just the sun and I with an empty time frame

and a circular pool of water.

I ponder on weather birds take advantage of their beauty to fly.

When I'm sitting staring at my reflection like a tiny ant, a blasting ray of sun shining down on me as if I was an angel , painting a picture. Tiny beads of sweat drip down my forehead, wetting my hair so gently, if only I could fly I could beat down the empty time, and I could win over the sun.

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

This is amazing...I have no more words to describe it :)

[Babe Roxx]

Nicely done...a lovely poem.

Beautiful.
GREAT amount of detail and imagery.

[Brian Kraklau]

i the event of coming to the bottom we learn to pick ourselves up, just to keep falling but remember our legs will never break if we lead with confidence and purpose the armor we all need. great write

[smalltownsympathies]

BEAUTIFUL

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

equilibrious! So, very fine you only need to draw it once and you have created visuals of imagery that stick to the mind! Alot of peace and optimism here that create such a phenomenon of art. This piece is a very powerfully established expression. enough said.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is very interesting and some very creative thoughts here... if I delve deep within them I see the struggle between innocence and complete freedom. You make one ponder with your artwork.

[Aven]

very interesting piece... I wouldn't have come up with it ^.^

[Dream Weaver]

A gorgeous earthen enchantment..
Well done...