Word Vomit

yaaay.. i remembered one of my old poems that was lost! Luckily it was a short one

 

Dusty visions abound, all around

The attic of thought is where I’m found

My bloated mind bulging with imagery

I need a purge to purify me

Reviews

[thecoolone52]

sometimes we just have to much info jammed in our heads.... great write.... the imagrey and vocab are right on point in this one

[Collette]

Ahhh, isn't that the truth. There's nothing that a good writing binge cannot fix, and you've captured the thought beautifully! In its simplicity, this piece speaks volumes, and I'm happy to have stumbled upon it. You did an excellent job making it relateable, and yet, personal. There is nothing I would add to this, it would only distract from the concise meaning of your poem. Thanks for remembering/sharing this piece with us, it is the highlight of my 10 AM cup of coffee!!!

[Jessica L Auster]

I must agree, you do say so much in few words...and you do it well. Not many people I know can pull this off, but you sure did. And I'm glad you remembered it, or else I wouldn't have stubled upon this. Great job!

[PhoeniX]

hey! this was great! i love how you described having a head full of words to something that you need to purge. this was good. its like you have so much you want to right, but its all held up inside and you just need to force it out. well done

[Robert Luna]

Damn i really loved this. It is so perfect. This is going into my favorites. Saying so much in so few words. Absolutely loved it.


Great Job!!!!!