Fishing in deep waters

The twist of fishing

You deserve a clap

The glow that you provoke

Road beams of a map

Red wine, bread soaked

WhOa, a freaking moat.

 

Sorrow knows no bounds

Literally, you around

Mount, the reins of fate

Senseless, wishful bait

Wait.

 

Like fish in the sea

Freedom comes undone

Worm wriggles, prey.

Pray, prey, pray,

Oh, what a pun!

 

Parallels sink in, poles attract

Opposite, danger calamity

Woe! Oh woe is me!

See? Self-pity

Tsk,tsk,tsk

Human folly.

 

Dusk awaits

The brief twilight

Minutes gone

Must wait.

Wait. To be said.

Author's Note

Some wee morning writes over green tea and staring at the moon. Exploring elements of fishing and its relatedness to life

Reviews

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

Beautiful! Your work is so lyrical, I love it

[An owl on the moon]

How each line you fill with emotional visions.. connected, phrase by phrase, moving us through life and moments... still moments. Wondrously done!

[deeps]

Wonderful write here,
I really enjoyed this

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I don't know what it is about but I loved reading it...........this was a fun poem.

[Blessed_Angel]

wow great job on this poem. i love it..

[Hunter C. Brown]

cool, love the layout of the poem, really great write. i know, im no good at reviewing. but i still liked the poem!!!