The Fog Witch

Husband find his wife two times

"It was chilly hazy day in November, and I was watching the fog roll in from the swamp." The Spanish moss in the tress began to sway.
My wife came running out of the thick fog with terror in her eyes. Screaming she said.
" THE WITCH IN THE FOG IS COMING FOR THE KIDS."
I ran into the fog to after the witch. I came across my wife laying in a ball terrified and crying. She screamed out.
" THE WITCH IN THE FOG IS GOING TO THE HOUSE FOR THE KIDS."

Reviews

[matrixmark]

I tell you what, even though this was really short. The amount of imagery which was planted down into the words was very vivid. It gave me some fantastic images in my minds eye and it felt so real. I really think that this could be a prologue which can lead to a great story of the fog witch. Maybe even do a prologue to this , just to explain the legend behind the fog witch.

Short, but great read.

Mark.