Ode to the Vampire

The Vampire trumps the Werewolf, here is why I think so... ;), Please see the humour in this..

Ode to the Vampire

Oh seduce me she said,

take your pleasure,

Make me your concubine

 

He sweeps her hair away,

Licks softly against the tender flesh

Seeking the pulse of life

 

Cradling her gently in his powerful arms

He plunges his canines into her lifeforce

Taking her to the brink of ecstasy

and back again

 

Clarity shines in her newborns eyes

Wisdom and ageless wonder

Reflects and radiates from his..

 

To live the endless life his sentence

To live it with her, his desire

To be his concubine, her dream.......

 

(at another scene)

Rising naked from another nite of hairy debauchery

The hairless canine has once again gorged on his meal

Awaiting the next full moon he is not a man

not a beast, not anything...

 

He is mindless in his butchery,

Heedless of his victims,

Unaware of his crimes,

and in need of dental surgery.. :)

Reviews

[Michael X]

Reading the haunting, magnanimous title and the prologue, certainly a poem to
capture my attention, bias to such tales of the supernatural, and stories about
vampires, creatures of the night, and lmao, what a twisted poem, sensually dreamy,
the vampiric seduction played theatrically on the heart, very captivating, i loved the
entire idea, comparing to the werewolve, the carnel ravages of the night beast,
now the ending, is completely seperated, and does something to this reading like,
brings the momentum to a realistic moment, a colorful, whimsical contemplation,
nice expression mel, its tantalyzing, ghostly compelling and suggestively comedic.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

hehehe... vampires are better... they just are... they're the midnight seductors who claim victims through pleasurable pain... Mmmm... yeah, you could say i have a slight vampire fetish.... I think this was really good... I like the difference you portray with the werewolf.... This is really good... Great Job!

[Jessica Benfield]

i loved this piece! i love both vampires and werewolves, and i must say, you truly had me rolling with that last line! ^_~ amazing write, Melanie!
smiles,
jess

[vanishing]

very funny.. the twist this writing takes
gets me
its perfect satrical writing
I love vamps and wolves
This ahh.. classic humorous-monstrous
thanks for sharing such talent

[Albert Freeman]

You know this has the beginnings of a very good story. You should try your hand at erotica too:P