Lovestruck

Lovestruck

A Poem by Sweet

She used to wander, in search of brighter days

Sometimes she would get hurt, in so many ways

 

Life used to be a struggle; it would never let her smile

When things seemed to work out, dread was added to the pile

 

But one day, everything changed

He came around, it felt so strange

 

He crossed the walls that kept her so isolated

Like a charming prince that was for so long awaited

 

He held her hand and took her on a stroll

It felt like heaven, it made her feel whole


© 2016 Sweet



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I'm sure whatever's left of you is more complete than anything; don't you seek brighter days unnecessarily without realizing you yourself are something truly special. Through the pain you've learned to cherish it's bane and now that you've waited for so long to find what you really want you can yourself learn the secrets to cross those walls :] You should keep writing happy lovestruck poems., the journey's awaits.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

9 Months Ago

Hi hi ^_^ thank you very much for sharing your thoughts about my poem. It's always nice to see throu.. read more
Misery

9 Months Ago

I'm glad for you =] Recently I've had some sleepless nights so these are always heartwarming! I've g.. read more
Sweet

9 Months Ago

I'm at the airport waiting. Hoping that the snow won't delay my flight any further. Still happy I go.. read more



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this captures how much we can need someone to help us out of our own tangle of thoughts

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sweet

9 Months Ago

I agree. Itso amazing the impact some people can have in our life. How much they can help us grow, t.. read more
I'm sure whatever's left of you is more complete than anything; don't you seek brighter days unnecessarily without realizing you yourself are something truly special. Through the pain you've learned to cherish it's bane and now that you've waited for so long to find what you really want you can yourself learn the secrets to cross those walls :] You should keep writing happy lovestruck poems., the journey's awaits.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

9 Months Ago

Hi hi ^_^ thank you very much for sharing your thoughts about my poem. It's always nice to see throu.. read more
Misery

9 Months Ago

I'm glad for you =] Recently I've had some sleepless nights so these are always heartwarming! I've g.. read more
Sweet

9 Months Ago

I'm at the airport waiting. Hoping that the snow won't delay my flight any further. Still happy I go.. read more

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