Save Her

For my daughter

A mid-summers day

Leaves flowing, trees fraying

Gentle breeze whispering nay

A room, a pillow, a bed, a picture

A husband, a wife, a daughter

A teddy bear beside the frame

A shadow dwells over the bear

A hand reaches out, suddenly being stopped

Two rings shine, fingers locked

The glass of the frame cracks

Canyons ripple across the heirs visage

A weeping sparrow, eggs cracked

Wrapping arms around the mother goddess

Heavens opening to welcome the arrival

A soul as pure as light my rest at last

A couple may start anew

From the ashes rise again, a phoenix

But until then mi hija, lo siento...im so sorry... 

Author's Note

R.I.P. Serenity Figueroa...god bless and keep your soul high in heaven for you are in a better place, mommy & daddy love you so very very much, be happy for the both of us, since you're so lucky to escape the torment of this world..we love you<3

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Too emotional when it comes to a child's death.
Hope you move on. Yes, may she rest in peace.

[Alex Figueroa]

thank you, i really do appreciate it, nice to know that people care just as much.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

:)

[Alex Figueroa]

=P

[Brave girl]

i can see how much emotions you're expressing there..i like this line:"wrapping arms around the mother goddess".well penned :)

[Alex Figueroa]

thanks i appreciate it..i tried to make sure i got the sense and emotion correct.

[Brave girl]

:) you sure did!

[Alex Figueroa]

again thanks =]

[Brave girl]

lol !

[Alex Figueroa]

=D woo!

[Brave girl]

crazy =D

[Alex Figueroa]

without a doubt, remember it =P

[Brave girl]

you're sure about it?!!...i can deal with that :p

[Alex Figueroa]

ofcourse i am, i must be insane, explains a lot actually, but yeah! deal with it =P

[~ Stefanie ~]

Wow, this piece holds so much emotion, it draws you in from the very first line. I actually teared up a little when I realized the outcome of this piece. So sad... I am very sorry for your loss and may your family fine peace amongst these hard times.

[Alex Figueroa]

thank you and i'm glad you wished me well, i'm sorry for the VERY late reply, i had to rebuild myself all over again..