Thinking out loud

I was looking at the mirror and started to sing these words, so I thought I'd share them with you too All feedback appreciated:)

She looked at her
reflection and said
you're just a
tortured soul
that nobody
knows
not even
me

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and good words shared my friend. Thank you Tee for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rana]

Triggers can be so mysterious, a flurry of wishes, a poetically vivid thought.

[Gee]

Your best years lay ahead of you, learn to love yourself, never settle for second best and go grab yourself a large slice of happiness

[Relic]

Finding ourselves when we're young is a tough thing to do. It takes lots of time to build the confidence we're looking for. Believe in yourself. It's vitally important as you go through life.

[Mara]

Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I appreciate it:)