Gone

This is for my Best friend. she was gone way too soon and i can deal with no more pain.

 

Gone

Thou art gone,

Now am I.

I can’t hide what I feel,

Though I’ve tried.

I miss thee too much,

Even to my own life.

Now mine shall be taken,

As I cry each moment.

 

Unable to say goodbye am I,

And I cannot go on,

So now I will say,

We can both be gone.

 

I refuse to let thee be alone,

Thee were my best friends.

For someone to just tell me thou art gone,

Is my end.

 

I wont live without thee,

My best friend.

For you are the only one I could truly trust.

I miss you to much to let thee go.

And now shall I be with thee.

Reviews

[Odanion]

The pain you have can be seen through this poem. Calling it a work of art would be a disgrace on what it is meant for, this is a true piece of your soul put onto paper (or in this case website)

This poem speaks from deep down and reading this caused me to really think about each sentence, each word as they fit together perfectly. A poem should come from the heart, well this poem comes from deeper I think, I liked this one a lot

I would say keep up the good work but I hope things like this don't happen more often just to get a good poem like this, I hope the next poem I read from you will be a happy one

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

gosh I'm so sorry Jasperess, my deepest sentiments. I feel exactly for my best friend. Loss, of so young is so hard :( ---mishel

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great emotion and sentiment.. although to be honest.. your friend will never leave you as they will forever remain in your heart even 30 years from now.. they will become an angel around you possibly.. I lost a very close friend at the age of 12 and I have always felt each time I cheat death (I've had close calls) that he was there protecting me.. You will see your friend some day again... I BELIEVE!!! Thank you for for powerful writing and again reminding me of my great lost friend whom I occassionally still think about!

[Abd-afeez]

Do you think its so good of him or her to commit suicide over a friend. An interesting read though.

[AJChallenger]

Very interesting. I've got a few comments, but I would have to read your other work to know if it applied. This is good as it stands, though. Good job.

[Hotaru Miyuki]

im sorry. last week, i lost my best friends... they dont trust me anymore and stopped talking to me. life sucks at school cause im alone and everybody hates me. great poem though

[Gravedigger]

I hope that you carefully think before you act, but I am behind you either way. Death is not the end, nor should it be regarded with the morbidity that it is often associated with. Please think it through before you decide though..

[ATG]

I miss you Jane.

I am sorry I told you about Bella. I am sorry I was the one who did this to you. I will miss you Jane.

I will really miss you. You have no idea how much you mean to me.

I understand that you can't do this any more. I am sorry life was so tough on you. You were the sweetest person I have ever met and I will miss you forever.

I love you Jane.