A written word from you,my love

A written word from you,my love

A Poem by Tali Katzman

 

I'm sitting here, waiting patiently

The distance is slowly growing, time is slowing

Old memories are reborn, imagination is going wild

Where are you my love, what are you doing

I miss you with my very essence, how much I long to hear your voice

A written word from you would mean the world to me

Something written purely from your heart, you have mine and I have yours

The light of hope is slowly fading; old memories run wild in my head

Songs have new meaning; they don't contain hollow words anymore

Every word wakes something within me that wasn’t there before, just for you

I'm waiting to hear from you my love

A written word from you will create sparks, make the light of hope burn brighter.

 

© 2010 Tali Katzman


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Nicely penned :), i liked your theme.

Posted 5 Years Ago


yeah, i believe that "when you do miss someone, time gets slow n then just moves like a insect that crawls...crawls...n crawls to get his storey...well, this's a nice one, here i saw that the depth in your words's movin' but fast not same as time that's slow.
well, you got me girl again, this is i think your another poem that i read out n you again fluttered me indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


i read through it again and i must say all of it is true. i smile to myself when i read this because of the relation i have to all that happens. it is very strong and truthful, two things that bring writing to life. very good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is strong, and even more so when it truly comes from the heart. Good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


there's a great fluidity in this piece, i think. cool stuff.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. It was good. And extremely sad.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This sounds romantic and sweet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Some words (letters in the old days) could save a life. I like the desire and need for some words to create hope with kind and sweet words. The poem is very good. I could feel the desire to know all things are alright. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful write about longing and fear of impending loss. Expressive and impressive.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Tali Katzman
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I am a writer. Images race inside my mind and I just try to get them on paper.Music is my escape,helps me think and create a fantasy world. I write sci-fi/adventure/fantasy/fiction short stories.. more..

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