FREEDOM

the mind of a very simple yet disturbed girl, who finds it peaceful to leave everyone. even the man she had loved.

She was not heart broken. She was not confounded. Rather she was charmed by the strength of her heart, when it was beating against her chest making her move forward to the real world and face her darkest fears. She knew her heart was never safe.

 

“Will I ever be free?” she asked herself and looked at the sky. It was the everlasting blue world that her soul was engulfed in. Those shiny dots that was twinkling above her always mesmerized her eyes.

 

Taking one step back again, to the man who had broken heart into pieces she kissed him goodbye. Because forever also meant a very short time.

 

“This is what I want, this is where I will find peace. The fear that I had is gone”

“Anna!” her heart froze, the only memory she had of this world was the cruelty she faced, the pointless expectations she had to fulfill.

“What the bloody hell are you doing there?” his cold, harsh voice meant nothing to her by then. “Get away, please love!”

“Setting myself free” she grinned and jumped towards her freedom.

 

He ran to the edge of the cliff only to watch her body vanish in the sea. His hands shaking because, he had lost the only star he had in his galaxy. He looked above and there it was, the bright golden shining star in front of him and he knew, she was taken by the world she was fascinated about. 

Author's Note

please leave a comment if you liked it! and if you didn't think it was good enough feel free for suggestions !

Reviews

[Leon C]

A nicely written story.

You used good imagery and delivered a satisfying ending.

Well done

[Tanzia Tasnim Usha]

thank you!

[Rafy T.Nym]

This is a wonderful story with perfect imagery.
If you add more details concerning the atmosphere or the girl's past,the story may look and sound more exquisite.But,no matter what,this story is beautiful whether you edit this or not.

Keep posting more of your works.Best wishes.

[Nikolean]

This is very well written! Is there more? I'd really much read this if it continues! It really captures the emotion beautifully.

[Tanzia Tasnim Usha]

i am going to write an entire book about something similar to this ! thank you so much for your time reading this :)

[Nikolean]

No problem :)

[Van Benjamin]

"Forever meant a vwry short time." 💙💙 Well narrated

[Tanzia Tasnim Usha]

thank you :D