Internal Music

Internal Music

A Poem by Taz
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I was told to write something happy...

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The music that lives, 
Within the soul,
As precious as, 
A mothers hold,
A child somewhere, 
Was born today,
Her love and happy, 
There to stay,
Forever more, 
The music will play,
And forever within, 
Her residence stay 
Making her smile, 
Every day.

© 2017 Taz



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This is simple elegance and poetically penned. The brevity of the piece captures perfectly magnitude of one of life's miracles, I also love that you drew the music analogy out, underlying the piece. The best part of me is a momma to a wee man, so this is deeply felt! Well done. Regards Ray

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank You. I am glad it spoke to you.



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This poem is just so well made with so much creativity.

This was a good read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Taz

5 Months Ago

Wow thank you.
Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Your welcome ^^
This is a delighting piece. A simple story, a simple poem and a simple thought are woven into a piece of lovely artwork. Just one thing - some commas can be removed to make the rhythm smoother!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you for the advice but I put them there to seperate each syllable properly.
The Exiled Wolf

8 Months Ago

Lol that's totally fine:) I agree that they are good indicators for intentional pauses when reading .. read more
Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you.
Really beautiful, keep it up!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank You.
Very lovely poem. Keep it up! Alberta strong :D

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

lol will do.
This is absolutely beautiful!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank you!
Hi Taz, thank you for your friend request. A very simple and beautiful write about the most precious moments in life!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thnk you for accepting and reviewing my work. I am happy you liked it.
nicely done.....it is harder for poets to write happy, isn't it.

but made that true connection between mother and child...and the music only the two can hear---as they shadow each other's beat.

j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it.
Beautiful use of words. I like the feel of happiness and thankfulness in the words. Thank you Taz for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taz

8 Months Ago

Thanks for reading.
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome Taz.
This is simple elegance and poetically penned. The brevity of the piece captures perfectly magnitude of one of life's miracles, I also love that you drew the music analogy out, underlying the piece. The best part of me is a momma to a wee man, so this is deeply felt! Well done. Regards Ray

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taz

8 Months Ago

Thank You. I am glad it spoke to you.
I love it. It brings the mildest nostalgia with the thought put into the poem, and it also gives me a sense of security and rememberance. Well done! ^^

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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