Out Of Pages

A foreboding one.

An old woman, 

Turned even older,

Life lived to the fullest, 

She, ran out of pages,

 A younger man, 

No weight on his shoulder, 

With no more to offer, 

He, ran out of pages, 

A middle aged lady, 

While shadows hover over, 

She hides behind a wall, 

She, ran out of pages, 

A baby boy, 

Turned even older, 

They're yet to discover, 

He will, 

Run Out Of Pages...

Author's Note

Just a page filled from the depths of my mind.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

¡¡¡¡In-cre-í-ble!!!! Very well done!! Profound beyond belief!

[Taz]

Thank you!

[Poetic License]

Chills from my toenails to my the tips of split end hairs. Girl! This is .... I don't even have words. WAAAYYY to honest. It reads so beautifully. It's flow is harmonic and fluid. The words have an impact all their own though! Good grief - I want to say you are WAAAYYYY to young to be thinking of running out of pages, but I know better. Just see that you don't find yourself running short, or I had better hear from you!

Fantastic symbolism. Again, I am blown away by the fluid ease of this piece in contrast to the message within. Well done, my friend. Very, very well done!

[Taz]

Thank you so much, I am very happy you could make something out of it.

[Taz]

I am also surprised at your concern.

[Poetic License]

I will always be concerned for you. You are precious to me.

[Jessica Lima]

Wow this gave me lots to think about Taz! Yet another wonderful, and most importantly ORIGINAL piece. In a world which makes me think I'm drowning in deja vu, what you write and how you write is always refreshing. I think we all wonder when we will run out of pages ourselves...

[Taz]

It is definitely thought provoking for sure.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I enjoyed this interpretation of the expiration of life. Very creative.

[Taz]

Thank you.

[Sinbulvinter]

Whoa, what a thoughtprovoking piece. The cycle of life! This is really beautifully written and meaningful! I love it!

[Taz]

Thank you. It is quite meaningful.

[Sinbulvinter]

You're very welcome. You're a really wise person. Your poetry alway blows me away!

[Taz]

You're too kind!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Your mind is very very interesting. I wish to explore it.