dolorem

This is describing the rushing feelings inside

It howls like the wind, Rushes like a river on a early spring morning. It hums and vibrates as a jet engine turns to override. It burns like the depths of hell. It is as insistent as an uncontrolled fire.It is as strong as the force of gravity pinning us down, but it also pushes and pulls into a whirling torment that throws me into the abyss of endless darkness

Author's Note

This one is more free style

Reviews

[humbleServant]

I like this very much! you definitely have a way with words!!!

[Abyss]

Thank you!

I just Have so much built up emotion that Ive pushed down and I finally now how to let it down

[humbleServant]

Good! keep it up!!