Under Your Compulsion

I wrote this about Damon Salvatore. Please note that I am not a masochist!

You watch me with those sinful eyes
Bless your lips, as cold as ice
With your needles pierce me, you
And give me chills until I'm blue

You watch me with those sinful eyes
And kiss me with the unholy device
You my nightmare, I fantasize
Until the night is through

You watch me dance just as you please
You watch me begging on my knees
And slowly bundles of my memories
Are being removed by you

And yet, I blindly follow
Allow you to make me hollow
Red liquids that you swallow
Shall one day, haunt you too.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Outstanding Siren, sounds like you've sold your soul to the devil here. He's too 'pretty' for my liking but I do see the attraction, and those eyes...wow! This one is captivating even though you're weak at the knees, you're poetry is strong willed!

[Infinite hexes]

I think its a perfect description for teh sex eyes

[Coyote Poetry]

A haunting tale in the poem. I like the us of the photo to strengthen the purpose and reason for the poem. No weakness in the poem. Nice flow of thoughts with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

I love this..xo excellent write..x

[UnderCompulsion]

Always and again I am amazed by this poem of yours.I could read it all day. You are so gifted.God blessed you for a reason ;)

[MOON]

Great flow, emotive.

[FJ Davis]

Strongly dramatic and very well done.
Shows definite promise!

[Muse]

It reminds my of a verse from a Florence and the Machine song. No Light No Light.

No light, no light in your bright blue eyes
I never knew daylight could be so violent
A revelation in the light of day

The last stanza...
Shall one day, haunt you too.

It's brilliant and I loved it! xo