What Was Seen

What Was Seen

A Poem by The Message
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Written for a contest with specific form requirements.

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In the swamp

Of the rat ones

A dove will

Up and above

To seek new

Pleasures and mind

Only to be shot back down

© 2009 The Message


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Clever little write! Thank you for submitting this to
Sal's "Whitney" contest. ~ Helena

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 3, 2009
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The Message
The Message

Hoover/Mobile, AL



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