Corridor Behind Me, Ahead

Corridor Behind Me, Ahead

A Poem by The Message

Outward spreading

the feet like mirrors

behind

voices two

indifferent, deny it

called out

spoke too soon

that we dared speak at all

as I step in the corridor behind me

stretching out ahead.

© 2010 The Message


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Woah. I liked it. It has a trippy deep feel to it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on January 20, 2010
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