My Blooming Flower

My Blooming Flower

A Poem by The Nude Writer
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A 3 word poetry challenge using Flower, Blossom, and Air.

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Left alone in nature.
Below an ivory tower.
Breathing deep
Watching the blossoming of my flower.

Born of a seed
My flower quickly grows
Melding with Mother Earth
The shedding of my clothes.

Rather than pick my flower
Before the petals bloom
I creep below a Daisy
And back inside the womb.

Inside I am safe
Free from strife and pain
The air is full of sweetness
My better senses wain.

Outside my flower dances
Naked in the breeze
Nectar dripping softly
My body now at ease.


© 2016 The Nude Writer



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I get a completely different, I guess, perspective on this piece. I can see the shedding of clothes and melding with Mother Earth, and all that, but I have always looked at a flower's blossoming as "putting on" rich raiments, i.e. getting dressed. I like the piece, anyway...covered or exposed. And I have to admit, I don't think I could ever be a nudist. I rely too much on pockets.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Hehe. I'm glad everyone has a different perspective :) Thank you! I don't need pockets. Everything I.. read more



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This feels a little 'A Midsummers Night Dreamish'. It is soft and sensual in its description of being comfortable in ones own skin and perhaps suggestive of masturbation too.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Lovely! We seem to forget that we are a part of nature. Our beautiful bare self is what is intended of us. We are our self most in the primal essence of life. But sometimes we must find a safe place.

Posted 9 Months Ago


It must be liberating to be a nudist. True - we were created with everything we need. We were meant to be one with nature. People didn't even know they were naked until sin entered the world. Imagine being naked and not even knowing it? Talk about innocence.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This poem...
Is Sensual...softly...
Lulls you into a Secret Garden...
I love the imagery...
Delicately Delightful Daisy Child..
Debbie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you Debbie for your review. I'm so glad you liked it :)
Naked body is far amazing than a disguised soul...I love your poem and the attitude you present.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)
Amazing use of words.
"Outside my flower dances
Naked in the breeze
Nectar dripping softly
My body now at ease. "
I like the above lines and you create beautiful place and vision for the reader. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thanks. Yes, those lines relax me so much when I read them :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I love Nature. Being near lake or roaming deep forest. Best place to be and you are welcome.
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Stunning imagery effortlessly conjured with such artful crafting and word choices. There is a subtle sensuality about this that innocent and lovely. Gorgeous piece. Starz

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate all your comments :) and I'm so excited you liked this one :)
This is beautiful, subtly sensual, around yet perfectly innocent. Insomniac i could write like this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind reviews. I'm really glad you enjoyed this :)
Great flow and choice of words. The use of them and images which are conjured up in my mind remind me of the way I write. A lovely encounter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Awwe, thanks Vanessa :) I'm really glad you liked it
Closed

1 Year Ago

I did. You're welcome.
You write beautifully. The metaphor is there if one is looking for it. There seems to be an opening of the self within this. As though one very young has discovered herself in a way that is more pleasing then she anticipated.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thanks Harvest!

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Added on August 2, 2016
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Tags: Flower, bloom, blossom, faerie, mother, nature

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The Nude Writer
The Nude Writer

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I am a proud nudist and writer. I live naked and my spirit is naked to the world. I don't hide much and tell it like it is. I write about the human body, nudism, being a woman and other topics. .. more..

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